Thursday, September 18, 2014

A Taste of Thursday: His Demand part 7

His Demand continued...

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"And what would more entail?" She sounded breathless even to her own ears. "Would you harm me? Would I have to beg for things? What if I decided I don't like more?"

Evan pulled back. "I could ease you into most of it. There would be a contract involved. You could come up with a safe word, which is a word you'd use if something was wrong, if you were hurting, or any such variant. It would alert me that everything needed to stop and we would address it. I would caution not to use the safe word for minor things. You would submit to me, but it would be a give and take between us. You aren't sure what you need, but I'd wager you wish for someone to take your control away. Perhaps push some of those boundaries of yours."

Catherine took a deep breath. She understood most of what he said, had heard bits and comments from others about these kinds of engagements. She hadn't expected a contract. "What kind of contract?"

Evan smiled. "You would sign a contract that says you agree to be mine for however long we agree. It's like making a deal. A safety thing for both of our protection."

"I don't know if I want to sign something that says I'm yours."

"But I think you might." Evan pulled her into him. The heat of his body invading hers. Her breath hitched with the contact and her clit throbbed.

"Maybe you could give me a taste before I signed. Show me what was expected and then I can make my decision."

Amusement flickered in his eyes. "Walk over to the window looking down at all the people and put both hands on the glass."

She cocked her head, curious, but obliged. What could it hurt? She'd asked for it. She did as he told her. The window felt cool to her sweating palms. She could hear him walking up behind her.

"No matter what happens––don't move your hands. There will be consequences."

"What kind of consequences?"

"For now, it will be a little taste. I promise to keep it simple. I won't hurt you or try to displease you in any way." His hand slid up the back of her shirt and goosebumps followed his lead. 

She was both disgusted with herself for wanting a stranger and so excited her panties were completely soaked. The danger involved in this kind of encounter seemed to fuel her inner flames. "I don't normally do this." The words flew out of her mouth before she could capture them.

"Normal is boring." 

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  1. Evan obviously knows she wants to be with him, he senses all things about her. I can't wait to read more. Great taster

    1. Thank you for taking the time to comment Naomi. I think he';s just arrogant enough to believe he knows what she wants...

  2. The craftsmanship of this short taster is brilliant. I think most people would question this arrangement and you used it as an opportunity to explain BDSM to the uninformed, gently but succinctly - to ease them into their own curiosity. Your descriptions are riveting and moving. "The heat of his body invading hers. Her breath hitched with the contact and her clit throbbed." How much more exact and apt does it get? Your last paragraph was a perfect reflection of the readers' status. Bam! Loved it. The anticipation is almost painful. Great Taster <3 xo

    1. I'm so glad that last bit rang out with you. When he popped off with that comment about normal- I thought i would die. He's such a strong character in my head. Thank you for taking the time to comment.

  3. I enjoy the readability of your prose. The storyline is interesting and kept my attention

  4. She's definitely in for some lessons. -Angelica

  5. I chuckled at the end of this scene and loved his last words: ""Normal is boring."" I'm hooked and interested to read if she signs the contract.

  6. I can't wait for next week's posts. Its getting very interesting!

  7. I'm sure she will take her hands away, I want to know what happens when she oes.

  8. Glad I joined and began taking part. This is an excellent piece of writing


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