Friday, March 14, 2014

Torn- 100 word flash

Even though he'd torn her wings asunder, causing red to stain her bare back, I still loved her. I held Affin in my thick hands watching her small form shudder with sobs I couldn't bear to hear, tears I had no way to stop, and pain I couldn't make go away.

Once she'd been a fae. A precious gem in nature's treasure. The goblin ruined that. There's no possibility to control the rage simmering just beneath the surface.

When I can put her down, I'll find the one responsible and rip out his heart. What else are dragons good for?


Best damn group of perverts you'll ever read. Every Friday we write flashers of 100 words precisely inspired by a given picture. The idea then is to comment on and support each others work.

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  1. His pain and rage jumps at you. Great flash. Love all things paranormal x

    1. Thank you for taking the time to comment.

  2. I loved this piece. You conveyed so much in those 100 words. Me? I'd ramble on for days =)

    I can't wait to see what you have in store for us for the A-Z Challenge. It's going to be a ton of fun.

    Be well,

    AJ's wHooligan in the A-Z Challenge

  3. A lot of emotion packed in 100 words. Bravo!

  4. This was a small piece that packed a huge whallop. Every emotion filled word, precisely placed for the greatest impact. I quite loved this piece. You are just wonderful with the Land That Never Was. Fantastic :) xo

  5. Loved this one! Have a wonderful weekend. :)

  6. Christine- Glad you enjoyed this one.

    Muffy- aww thank you. :)

    Gayl- thanks for taking the time to comment

    T.E.- I'm so glad it was an enjoyable read.

  7. Dragon revenge! I'm so used to dragons being the bad guy, this was a nice relief. That goblin doesn't stand a chance. :)

  8. *shivers*

    What fantastic world building in 100 words, and his rage is a palpable thing. Awesome!

  9. Beautiful, sad, and full of gentle passion. I loved this, and I hope the dragon gets his revenge. Great flash! :)

  10. Great flash, thanks for sharing :)

  11. Complete! You get it all and the imagery is stated perfectly. Got the pain on the part of both parties...


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