Thursday, February 20, 2014

His Sins- Friday flash 100 words



Long tendrils of hair slid down her back. The earth had already come to claim her. 

His muse. 

She'd inspired him to be the better man. To never give up. Even as her body disintegrated in his hands, he believed he would find a way to bring her back. She was not dead, just punished for his crimes against nature, his sins, not hers. While he wanted to rage out against the earth, he knew he had no one to blame but himself. 

He placed a loving kiss along her forehead. Her eyes closed and the wind whisked her away.

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8 comments:

  1. Excellently written! Tinged with sadness at the end. I want to know more

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  2. You're breaking my heart! Bring her back. Beautifully done.

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  3. That was beautifully written, smoothe, fluid and painful. You capture of the elegant angst and loss beautifully and skillfully with you string of pearls. Love this tease. Stunning. xo

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  4. Impressive and beautiful. Lots of subliminal messages here ;-)

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  5. Beautifully written, so magical, and I hope he will be able to find her to get her back, and free her of the punishment. Def need to know more. :) Great Flash!

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