Thursday, February 6, 2014

Gone ~ Friday Flash 100 words





Gone

My fingertips slid along the butterfly tattoos. Gooseflesh scattered across her soft skin.

"Are you sure? You won't be able to take it back?"

She turned, blue eyes pierced the depths of my soul- clear and determined. "It must be done and I'd have no one but you, Evan." 

Her hand slid over my chest and I shivered.

I closed the distance between us, rolling over on top of her soft form. She arched into me and her red dress split as I moved between her legs. I penetrated, tears fell from the corners of her eyes and she disappeared.

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Best damn group of perverts you'll ever read. Every Friday we write flashers of 100 words precisely inspired by a given picture. The idea then is to comment on and support each others work.




6 comments:

  1. Oh, God, Decadent.......I don't quite know what to make of that piece, but it was fabulous, heartbreaking, sad but hopeful. Beautifully written, so clear and passionate in a breathtakingly child-like, innocent way. I loved this piece. I would so enjoy to read your expansion of this story....! xo

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  2. Beautifully described! I also found it heartbreakingly lovely.

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  3. passionate, endearing, lost love... beautifully done T

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  4. Full of emotion. Beautiful, yet sad too. Great flash

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  5. heartbreakingly beautiful. Love this

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  6. Oh wow! Beautiful and full of passion. My heart aches for her and him both. I want to know more of these two. Great flash. :)

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