Thursday, February 13, 2014

Backward- Friday flash 100 words


 


~Backward~

The only way Sira could see the world around her was through a magical mirror. She was white blind meaning her eyes were covered in a white film, a curse by a goblin. But if she looked into the mirror she could see again.

Everything came out backward.

The rock jutted into her bare flesh as she turned her back to land. She waited as the first signs of his presence came. His blue eyes sparkling and long black hair dancing in the breeze.

Always moving in the past, never coming forward, again the death of her love played out.




 Best damn group of perverts you'll ever read. Every Friday we write flashers of 100 words precisely inspired by a given picture. The idea then is to comment on and support each others work. Keep flashing!

9 comments:

  1. Oh how sad, yet beautiful. I feel so sorry for Sira and hope by some magic her sight will be restored. Great flasher

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  2. That was superb! How cruel and tragic to be re-living a loved-ones death over and over. What a spell and a curse of beauty. Very clever and skillyfully crafted. Loved it!! Xo

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  3. Ahhhh so sad but eel written and love the twist of the mirror great imagination... hugs T

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  4. Oh no! Can she eventually save him? Remove the goblin's curse? I must know <3

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  5. Wow, that was shocking. I never expected that. Great twist.

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  6. Interesting take on this picture! I really want to know what she is seeing and why she's forced to watch her love's death over and over...

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  7. Poor Sira. I hope she is able to lift the curse that the goblin placed upon her eyes. To know of her love and to see him die each time. Deep and full of passion. Great flash!

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