Sunday, January 26, 2014

8 Sentences...








This is a continue from last weeks- click here to read the previous one

"Throwing things again I see. The feral have you all choked up?" The voice came from the gnome, Wicka, Drayden hired to clean up. She was okay for a gnome. Her blonde ponytail bobbed as she stretched her short form up the wall to clean off the coffee. "Stay out of my business, gnome," Drayden warned. He didn't mind the species so much, but they weren't exactly high up in the elfin social structure either. They did odd jobs, most of them dirty. 

~From my current WIP 

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Weekend Writing Warriors



This Friday is the release of my second book in The Trouble With Elves series.
Tempting Clover is currently up for pre-order.
Click the cover to find out more about my elves...

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16 comments:

  1. Hey, *somebody* has to do those dirty jobs. ;D

    Great snippet, I love your writing style!

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  2. *giggles* I have to do this: G-G-G-Gnome! :D Very nice excerpt! Love how their jobs are odd and dirty. I just wanted to let you know that I don't usually schedule my excerpts to go live until 6 am so I think you read the same one twice, but I thank you for the two lovely comments! :)

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  3. Love the humor. Social structure even in elfin land. Good eight.

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  4. Cute and descriptive. I like the voice of the piece.

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  5. This sounds intriguing! Also sounds like the gnome is getting to him. :)

    Donna

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  6. He might think he doesn't mind the species so much, but it sounds like he actually does. I love the sass in her comment!

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  7. Interesting world building. I like your gnome lady. Fun snippet!

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  8. Congratulations on book 2. Great description.

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  9. Gnomes and elves- I love it! Can't wait to get more of the story.

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  10. I can't wait to read more of this- already sounds like fun. (I hope I haven't posted twice- the machine ate my first attempt.)

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  11. Humor, insightful glimpses into the gnome/elf worlds, awesome writing.

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  12. Could definitely feel the tension there about the gnomes. Great 8! Intriguing snippet.

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