Monday, September 9, 2013

-More than a kiss blogfest- From The Trouble with Elves


A snippet from my current wip in my elf series- Tempting Clover

*graphic language*

"Next time I will oblige your pride." He advanced on her, taking away the distance between them. His jaw clenched when he reached her. Clover moved backwards, wary of his intentions. His green eyes glared. "Are you worried now, Elfess?"

Her breath hitched as he crowded her and moved her further back until her ass found the counter. He placed his hands on either side effectively capturing her. She had nowhere to go. "I'm not worried. Why should I? You kept him from hurting me so I know you won't turn around and do the same thing." She licked her lips. She felt the wetness on her panties and rubbed her legs together enjoying the friction.

"No I won't hit you, but there are plenty of things running through my mind to appease the whip of your tongue. I should see to it that you are punished for your brazen words." He leaned in, his lips hovering above hers. Her breath quickened and she waited for those lips to devour her. "I could lick you until your mouth only said my name. I could let my cock loose upon you and have my way. I know you'd allow it- I can smell your desire, Elfess."

Her panties soaked, a tightness wound its way around her core and she desperately wanted him to punish her.

He stepped back and let her go. "But it wouldn't do much good since a harlot isn't my type. I prefer the kind of lady who sticks to one man not many."


  1. *fans self* yep. Steamy. :) Clover is brave. I'd be running for the hills if I was in her shoes.. :D

  2. Fantastically steamy! And, oh, what a tease to pull away like that! Thank you for participating in the blogfest.

  3. Wow, he's a tease! Nice tension between the characters.

  4. I agree with Christine. Such a teasing man. I demand you get back here!

  5. Was there a kiss? Like the change of direction of the scene at the end. Writer’s Mark

  6. That's hot and such a tease!! Great interaction between the characters!

  7. She got shot down with a shut gun. Damn! But great to see a guy with morals even if he comes off as a tease. I see him as a teacher. Clean up lady! Awesome work.

  8. Excellent use of tension! Well done!


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